So, i'm writing a novel.
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Re: So, i'm writing a novel.
Your character development might as well not be there for the countless reasons posted in this thread already... take some criticism and stop making terrible excuses
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If you know it's bad, work hard to improve it
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Re: So, i'm writing a novel.
First off, love these comments, secondly, if it's for a school, you should focus on grammar, character development and an eye for detail. Teachers will eat it up more than any other teen's idea. I would scrap the idea, or improve upon it with more description and characters that feel real, or aren't...bland.
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