Parabolani - "A Beautiful Collision"

[jake2k3]

Hey all,
For any of you familiar with the David Crowder Band, I've gone and recorded a cover of his song "A Beautiful Collision". For those unfamiliar with DCB, I recorded a song! Before you harp me for sound quality I recorded this using Audacity, my Rock Band mic, and a $35 USB to 1/4 inch cable I bought from Target. I'm not exactly rich, and I got the highest quality I could from what I had available. But on to the song.

It's not a cover intending to sound exactly like the original. The only things still intact from the original are the lyrics and vocals (to a point), and the key/chord progression. I do not play it the same as DCB does, nor was I trying to. I feel that the definition of a "cover" is a song you took and made yours.

I'm open to any criticism you have. Bring it on. I'm not the flashiest or most skilled guitarist, I know, but I feel that at this point this is my best work. I'm not asking you to spare your criticism, I want you to be brutaly honest with me, just don't expect flying solos and trills and stuff.

Anyway, you can listen to the song at my MySpace, here, or compare it to the original versions here (A Collision), or here (B Collision).

Listen and please leave feedback.
~Jake2k3